First Draft

This is the first draft of my front cover. At the moment it has no picture on, but it has my masthead and possible story lines.

I believe the masthead on this copy works very well, however I believe the tag which I have used to present information does not look very effective and needs to be more shaped as the shape is to blocked. I have also not included a price on this draft so will therefore have to include this in my next draft. I also believe I need a stronger headline for my splash.